Ripe Ruins

Ripe Ruins

 

digging around, but,

this sand offers nothing;

 

only these old bones speak loudly

of some forgotten sad world...

 

that once had such hope and light;

what happened to the skeleton's smile

 

2-19-08

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Wonderful piece forgotten past, missing smiles. Great in it's metaphor.

[None]

This is incredible. It hits hard and is so well written!

[JC Fox]

another great poem it was short but held great visuals

[Shelly Wiseberg]

They faded away underground smiling from beyond the earth,Shelly