Willy Please

Willy Please,

I'm only going to tell you this one more time, Yes, I did love you, once!
Before all this mess, now leave me alone, or I'll have to call the police again... and this time they say that you'll do time. Do you really wanna be known as the town's peeping Tom?

Goodbye
Mary

8-16-07

© 2008 James K. Blaylock

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THE BLACK SEAL

hilarious

Posted 16 Years Ago

Michael X

that is really classically hilarious, really gets to the funny bone, the beginning opens
with a serious tone of thought which captivates the moment "willie please"
immediately draws the reader to the next sentence, speaks a lifetime of valume
in with the most minimal amount of wording, which really has an effect all its own,
james, this was whimsical, hard knox romantic, fun to read, true talent's non ceasing, mike

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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James K. Blaylock

Tyler, TX

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Hi, I'm James K. Blaylock and I'm a poet/writer. I'm 39, and I live in Texas. I was born and raised here. I have been writing now for 13 years and I've been blessed to be published a number of times. .. more..