Blood In Snow

Blood in Snow

 Every snowflake that has fallen represents the horrific blood shed,

Every cold raindrop represents the warm tears I have cried,

Every hungry day represents another exhilarating year of suffering,

Every loud gunshot represents the ones who have fallen,

Every good thought represents the time we had together,

Every struggling breath represents my battle to keep breathing

Every sick messenger represents a telegram full of sorrow,

Every telegram represents the death of our loved ones,

Every time I try to talk to you from above, You don't answer

 Every snowflake that has fallen represents your blood in the snow. 

Reviews

[Candice P]

Love this, keep it up...good job

[SoulSplatter]

very sad and thought provoking. I like the imagery and the feeling I get when I read this. Well done. Keep writing poet!

[twixbubbles]

Thank you very much, Im just 11 years old people at my school don't usually call me a poet they call me the deep girl who writes

[SoulSplatter]

;) I started at just your age ... I'm 26 and I still write. A lot. Never give it up, and yes you are very deep. Remember to always ask questions in life and never give up your muchness... As the Mad Hatter might say. Hehe. Remember to try to put yourself in other peoples shoes... These things will help you grow as a writer, a poet, a deep girl. Much love fellow poetess

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

The sadness is palpable. Well done.

[twixbubbles]

Thank you:)