DEATH

umm....i have no idea how to describe it. it's how i feel sometimes and probably how alot of other people feel

Sorrowful, but wanted ending of life.

The laughing won't stop, it's time to let go.

Depressed and crying, I pick up a knife.

This could go one of two ways, quick or slow.

Thoughts unspoken will remain in my head.

No one will ever care, so why should i.

Slowly,in pain, i'm dieing in my bed.

every word u speek is another lie.

You can't help me, dont bother trying.

Theres not a thought fo regret in my head.

My end has come, yet there is no one crying.

My sheet once white, are now stained bloody red.

This selfish desicion was mine to make.

My life was nothing but a big mistake.

 

 

Author's Note

ummm i'm not really the best at spelling so....

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow this was so full of sad emotions.. and yes so many do and have felt this in the past as well. Sometimes we question why we are here.. our purpose and feel alone. I believe no matter the circumstance that every life is a miracle.. every birth is a beautiful thing.. being raised in povertry.. surviving alcohol abuse and many other abuses around me.. I am still fighting. Life is truly what we make it.. and those who come from rough backgrounds can have more passion, energy, wisdom, intensity.. more definition overall. It just depends on how you feel! Love is a state of mind... there are those born in all environments that can grow up feeling lonely, depressed, unloved. Learn to cherish the simple things.. admire your power from such sad emotions.. as so many do not feel anything!!! When I am sad I just try to think.. there's only one way to go and that is up! I love your honesty in this.. know these feelings.. it's been many, many years but I am here to tell you that there will be better days! =)

[East of Eden]

There's a lot of strong emotions here and you convey them very clearly. It's so negative that I'd love to read a more hopeful poem after this one to complement it. See the light in the darkness :-)

[Sseoni]

Wow! What an amazing, powerful, emotional poem! Absolutely amazing! Greatly detailed, descriptive, and overall, fantastic! :D