The last thing that ever meant anything

The last thing that ever meant anything

A Poem by Twistedwords
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Maybe walls shouldn't be broken down sometimes.

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So tell me honestly, did you really want this?
Enlighten me, please help me understand
Was there something I missed?
Am I no longer a part of your plan?

"I'll be okay", is that what you want me to say?
Is that what you want to hear?
"I'll be fine", I can go on for more than a day
But you've left me all alone, my dear

You broke down my walls and I let you in
I allowed myself to be weak, vulnerable
Now I'm nothing to you but a has-been
a stop over, a road block, left miserable

How can someone complete me 
Only to shatter me into pieces
As I look down on what's left of me,
I tell myself, 
I don't think this kind of pain ceases

© 2016 Twistedwords


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Twistedwords
hoping someone can relate to this. Comments, opinions and criticism are highly appreciated!

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Most of us if we are honest can relate to this. Keep your writes coming. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this. I can totally relate.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twistedwords

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and could relate to it too! :D
I totally relate
A very honest and open write

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nisreen

8 Years Ago

I did that once
One day I will do it with the person I love
Twistedwords

8 Years Ago

I'm pretty sure when that happens, the memory will be one worth writing about.
Nisreen

8 Years Ago

It will be like a photograph
Forever present In mind

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