Take My Heart, It Works Fine

Take My Heart, It Works Fine

A Poem by JoshuaCmngs
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A sad story.

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You are everything in this world to me.

I know it might be hard to understand,

But please hold out just a little longer,

And forget that I was your man.

 

Forget about me,

And forget about us,

Leave it all behind,

Put it all in the dust.

I grimace then smile

As I feel the stings of a thousand lies told,

I know that I couldn’t be there for you,

I wouldn’t dare be so bold.

 

Dying slowly from the inside,

Such a terrible fate,

The pain and suffering you went through,

I would do anything to alleviate.

They said it was your heart,

Well that I could fix,

Now we are one,

Our bodies are now mixed.

 

You are too good for me,

How great you are you never knew,

But the world would stop if you died

So I cut my heart out and gave it you.

You might ask

“How did you know your heart had enough shove?”

It’ simple really,

Because no broken heart can hold that much love.

 

 

© 2016 JoshuaCmngs


Author's Note

JoshuaCmngs
Enjoy.

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... again, i don't have words. The emotion can be sensed in this and it's just- I don't have words.

'Because no broken heart can hold that much love'.
Are you trying to reduce me to a puddle? This line is just so touching, I'm surprised it isn't a world famous quote. This is one of my favourites by you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JoshuaCmngs

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. Glad you liked it.



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... again, i don't have words. The emotion can be sensed in this and it's just- I don't have words.

'Because no broken heart can hold that much love'.
Are you trying to reduce me to a puddle? This line is just so touching, I'm surprised it isn't a world famous quote. This is one of my favourites by you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JoshuaCmngs

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. Glad you liked it.

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JoshuaCmngs
JoshuaCmngs

Cartersville, GA



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