Tearing me

I watch you, as you flirt with her,

as you look at her. 

you look, you at her with such love, 

such passion, that angles are probably crying above,

 and it tears me inside.

 I want you to look at me like that.

and ive tried,

 tried to get you to

To love me like that.

To want me,

 like you want her.

To kiss me,

 and set me free.

But, you dont. And it'll never be.

I look at you, drawing hearts with her name in it

it tears me inside

i go home

to lock myself in my room

and i cry

because you tore me inside.

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Although it’s a cliché poem, the emotions are well delivered and evident. It’s a poem that many people can relate with, and most importantly, the pain you’ve showcased here is definitely not something only you feel.

Keep Writing. ^___^