We're Sorry

We're Sorry

A Poem by twisteD

Hey world, how you doing today? 

The sun is up and i'm feeling great.

Watching the birds fly and the people laughing

watching the sunset and the moon rising.

I'm looking at the face of the man on the moon,

he's looking down at us, and aint doing so good.

Hey world,how you doing today?

There's a war going, i aint feeling so great.

I feel you tremble beneath my feet,

Watching people die, kill, and lay down in defeat.

Hey world, how you doing today?

The world is ending, but i'm feeling okay

© 2010 twisteD


Author's Note

twisteD
so if uv read my other poems, i bet you know how i feel about the war

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Nice poem!I like it!I am not good at poems though I won't judge too much...

Posted 7 Years Ago


haha thanks azlamalo

Posted 14 Years Ago


ha i love how its starts off on one light and ends on another

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 11, 2010
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