No one to save me

alone in a world full of lies and decit. no one is there to help me.

Is anyone there? Is there anyone near? i need someone, and there is no one to hear. To hear my pleas,as for my voice is still loud, but not once i have fallen to the ground.

I need someone, but there is noone here, no one to care for me when the end is near. No one to love me or hold my hand. I yell for help, but as my voice grows dim, there is no one here, who can help me avert my end.

Reviews

[Lorraine]

I’m pretty sure someone there is willing to help you, you only have to ask. Your poem is heartbreaking and simply helpless. It contains so much raw emotions that it’s easy to sympathize.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[azlamalo]

sorry :( good poem tho