New Moon

New Moon

A Poem by Lazzz is twisessed
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This is a poem I wrote for a English assignment. It is based on the Number 1 New York Times Bestselling list Twilight Series by Stephenie Meyer. It is mostly about New Moon, and some lines I have made to fit in with the poem. It has one part of Eclipse.

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New Moon
We were taking a walk in the forest
Up in the sky there was a new moon
He said he had to leave
And it would be the best thing to do
I watched him disappear through the forest trees
I screamed out “Wait!”
But no reply was made
I tried to follow him but I just got lost
It started raining
And I just sit there and sobbed
I heard someone call my name
But I did not reply
I was too sad to even think about
Anything else than why might he have gone
I was exhausted of what had happened today
So I lay my head on the muddy ground
I heard my name one more time
And then closed my tired eyes
Six months passed and he still hadn’t come back
I fell in love with someone else
But not like the love he and I had
I came back from an exhausted day Jacob and I had
And when I turned on the lights a visitor met my eyes
I jumped up and down to greet our important guest
All she did was stare at me and said “Edward thinks your dead.”
I started breathing hard thinking about what she just said
She said my true love, Edward, thought I was dead.
Edward was far away
But I really did not care
I hopped up on the plane
And ran when we were there
I ran until I saw him, until I saw his face
And when I finally saw him I scram “Edward wait!”
He was happy to see me, I can tell
I was so happy too, that I fell
He caught me and I stared into his eyes
He asked if I was alright
And I said “I’m just fine.”
We went back home happy as can be
He walked me to the door and bent down on one knee
I looked around quite nervously
And he asked “Isabella Swan?
I promise to love you forever-
Every single day of forever,
Will you marry me?”
I stared at him with my eyes big and wide
He looked at me and said “Bella, please with out you my life is like a moonless sky.”

© 2008 Lazzz is twisessed


Author's Note

Lazzz is twisessed
I know. I don't think its the best poem ever.

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very well written and very well said, I enjoyed your write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


twilight fanfiction! put it on FF, people will love it. It's very well done, and I think it's great. Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


It's a great poem. Maybe a little more spice added you know? I still really like it though. Better then I could've done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


thanks. It's a really old story my friend wanted to read. I really like your poem, I too am a fan : )

Posted 16 Years Ago


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well i read it and it really is a poem...
it is nice

Posted 16 Years Ago


yeah, i totally agree with you! jk! although, you should have changed the names, no?

Posted 16 Years Ago



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