Crimes of Mars - The Shaming (7 of 12)A Story by Paris HladThe Shaming
The
Fifth Rhyme of Jean Ami
A smug blue heron was awhile
A tenant on my lake,
And crept along the shallows, Where a minnow he would take
He would not deign my company And kept a certain mood,
That underscored A queer conceit
And sniffy attitude!
But one day, fairest egrets Seemed to tumble from the sky And took the heron’s home for theirs -
Oh, how they pleased my eye!
Much lovelier than him, I thought, So graceful, smooth, and sleek
I was most pleased That they had come
And bid them stay the week
The heron rudely stood near them; The egrets held their ground
As they would not endure the slight And made a croaking sound
And yet there was no more to do; They knew not war nor word;
And for some days, They shared the lake, As is the way of birds
But in the stilted Peace that came,
The heron flew away Into the scroll of history
And fable of today
The comely egrets didn't care And left soon afterward -
Indifferent to the heron’s plight, The shaming of a bird.[1]
Thoughts of Camille Du Monde: Entry
Seven This
ballad speaks to the smallness of every man. Consider that the heron and the
egret are similar in most ways, but the poet’s dislike of the heron causes him
to praise and prefer the egrets, caring little about the heron's shaming. But
all of us are like that concerning other people. Those we do not like, we see
as uglier than those we love or do not know, even uglier than those we have
disliked in bygone days. When they experience adversity, we see but justice in
their suffering; and in their pain, we see a kind of grace, for grace, is ever
a part of justice. One might suppose that when harm comes to a life we
disapprove of, our faith in God increases by the satisfaction of our hate,
which we mistake for an admirable love of justice.
This
phenomenon flourishes among the nobles of Earth.
A
lord may disapprove of a rival’s plan, and if it fails, (even if by known
deceit or evil action), he will see in that plan’s collapse both a proof of
God’s existence and an affirmation that God is of one mind with him, at least
where his rival’s plan was concerned. All men are hypocrites, I suppose, but
the loftier a man’s station, the uglier, and more frequent this sin is likely
to be.
For
a powerful man is freer to flaunt his vanity as a character virtue.
And
if he is stronger and more cunning than his peers, he will have others around
him to feed his vanity and even make sacrifices on its behalf, sometimes at the
price of their public shame. Indeed, such lesser men will come to regard their
sire’s enactment of hypocrisy as a kind of wisdom engendered by a nobler mind.
Of
course, poor men are hypocrites, too, but their hypocrisy is less
dangerous to others and often more amusing than it is condemning. And if they
are good at what they do, they have less need to appear to be something that
they are not. In fact, if they are
good, it is to their benefit to be seen for what they are. That is not often
true for the powerful man because he is chiefly good at getting and keeping
power, a dubious virtue that requires him to practice deception at all times. Yet
rarely does anyone favor considerations that are not believed to serve him
best. [1] Paris
claimed that the events he describes in “The Shaming of a Bird” took place on
Lower Winona Lake in the Summer of 2014. This was during a time when Paris had
taken to photographing only birds and the other fauna that lived on or near his
property. But the heron, he speaks of in this ballad, was not amenable to his
good intentions, and that forced him to use a powerful zoom lens when he photographed
the bird. That frustrated Paris because he believed that the use of such a lens
in wildlife photography is cheating. When the egrets arrived on the scene, the
heron left, and Paris had a much easier time approaching the lake’s beautiful
new tenants. This allowed him to capture what he believed to be “first-rate”
wildlife images, and he came to think better of the egrets than he did of the
uncooperative heron. What caused the heron to leave, is anybody’s guess, but
the poet felt that the heron was a “coward and a jerk.” The reader may be
interested to know that the heron and the egret are very similar creatures.
Both are long-legged, freshwater, coastal birds who have similar appearances
and belong to the same Ardeidae family. However, egrets are always smaller in
size.
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Added on January 25, 2023 Last Updated on January 25, 2023 AuthorParis HladSouthport, NC, United States Minor Outlying IslandsAboutI am a 70-year-old retired New York state high school English teacher, living in Southport, NC. more..Writing
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