Left behind

Left behind

A Poem by twinklestar
"

I'm sorry for anything I ever did to make you mad/sad at me. I love you regardless always Daddy <3.

"

 We are certain of our nearest and dearest if we have them.

simultaneously savoring the warmth of a bond so strong.

Always knowing that we'll be together forever.

Though one day things begin to get frosty and you feel the ever growing distance.

Sifting through memories in your mind trying frantically to hold onto that moment in time. When things were full of life.

Never even giving a second thought to it being gone and over with .

Thinking "This can't be happening, it won't end this way. Not wanting to accept the impending doom. 

To be left behind and wallow in agony while they move forward. 

Trapped in perdition showing no mercy your torn to pieces. 

Like rubbish you have been discarded... you've been left behind.

© 2012 twinklestar


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twinklestar
it's personally related, forgive me if you don't get it

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I liked this piece... it looked to me like it was written from the parents view of a child who has grown to the point of leaving and moving on... something every parent wants, a capable child who can succeed in life... but breaks their heart as the child lives up to their potential.

well the beauty of not giving all the details in a write is that each reader can see what it means to them...

well done. a great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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twinklestar

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading, as always your review is much appreciated Nicholas :)



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Tex
I liked this piece... it looked to me like it was written from the parents view of a child who has grown to the point of leaving and moving on... something every parent wants, a capable child who can succeed in life... but breaks their heart as the child lives up to their potential.

well the beauty of not giving all the details in a write is that each reader can see what it means to them...

well done. a great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

twinklestar

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading, as always your review is much appreciated Nicholas :)

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