I saw you...

I saw you...

A Poem by twinklestar
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You see that one person and just know ... but there is no insta love spell. That's not how the world works ^-^

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Out of the blue, I saw you and didn't know what to do  .

Standing there without a care .

Looking fabulous, like cotton candy at the fair.

Like an idiot I stare .

Hoping to impress you .

With the stupid things that I do.

Thinking maybe one day we can be...

Till then...

We is just me ^^'...

I smile sadly now T-T.

Looking at someone so enchanting and thinking how...?

One day it will be "we" instead me .

When it comes, we will hum .

Beautiful melodies . 

Together you and I will make ever-lasting memories .

© 2012 twinklestar


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Haha this is really cute :) I love the emoticons! =D

I also love how the poem played out as if telling a story. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


twinklestar

12 Years Ago

^o^ haha thank you soooo much! Yeah it's pretty true for alot of people unfortunately :D. Usually p.. read more
Destinyxi

12 Years Ago

Haha definitely! You're very welcome. Keep it up :D
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Tex
very sweet poem I liked it very much. A very true to the heart authentic write.

great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


twinklestar

12 Years Ago

Thank you Baby Ricochet for the father time review as well
This is awesome, described so nicely and a true fact!! this happens with a lot of people but not everyone come's out as the winner but hope you do : )

Posted 12 Years Ago


i have felt this...met a certain person and just said to myself...someday i am going to be with this person---sometimes it happens quickly, other times it works slowly...but usually i succeeded in at least getting together with the person...
not that it ended up beautiful music together, or lasting memories...but at least a short term win.

jacob

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 20, 2012
Last Updated on November 20, 2012
Tags: love at first sight, stunned, floored, captured, ecstasy, hope, yearn, lust, want, need

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