Already Over

I got the inspiration from a song of the same title. Sorry that it's been so long since I've written...I've been so busy with sooooooooooo much crap.

I gave it all to you

Letting go of me

Reaching as I slip

But now it's already over

 

I gave it all to you

Sharing all of me

Weeping as I crawl

I know it's already over

 

I gave it all to you

I have nothing left

Screaming as I fall

I know it's already over

 

I gave it all to you

Nothing left to lose

Loving you again

I know it's already over

 

I'm broken and I'm weak

Building my defense

Guarding all that's left

Knowing it's already over

 

I'm broken and I'm weak

Standing all alone

Rebuilding my heart

I know it's already over

 

I'm broken and I'm weak

Shedding no more tears

Losing all my strength

And now it's already over

 

I'm broken and I'm weak

Falling in the black

Crying out for hope

Too late, it's already over

 

I'm nothing but a shell

Drowning in the dark

Hiding all my shame

I know it's already over

 

I'm nothing but a shell

Shunning all the world

Howling as I weep

Because it's already over

 

I'm nothing but a shell

Fleeing from the light

Rememb'ring what I was

I hope it's already over

 

I'm nothing but a shell

Knowing no more pain

Running out of time

Too bad it's already over

 

I'm walking all alone

Stripped of all I was

Nothing left to lose

My struggle's already over

 

I'm walking all alone

No one beside me

No more pain to feel

My suff'ring's already over

 

I'm walking all alone

Searching for my light

Finally at peace

My curse is already over

 

I'm walking all alone

On this twilit road

Restarting anew

My pain is finally over

 

Finally over now...

Author's Note

What do you think? If you know the song (which I'm not sure if anyone does) then this will read better.

Reviews

[Sarah]

Well, I don't know the song (sorry x_x;) but this read perfectly fine anyway. XD The meter was flawless for most of it, and the short lines worked really well. (: I love the random repetition of the first lines from stanza to stanza & the repetition of "it's already over". Great job. I was attempting to pick a stanza, but I kept liking each one better. XD Uhm, let's see, stanzas 3 & 4 are my favorite! ^___^

[Kevon]

Well, I love the transition, the repeating of certain parts, good job