When You Love Someone

I am talking about this one guy

When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.

Every day you would hope and pray,
That he would always stay this way.
He treated you like you should be treated,
You thought your life was finally completed.

You thought your love was growing true,
And then one day it was all so blue.
He started putting you down and it hurt,
You thought all you were to him was dirt.

He started ignoring you and you wondered why,
All you wanted to do was curl up and die.
You thought your relationship would never end,
But that was all so fake and pretend.

One night he was so sweet to you,
You thought all those things were maybe untrue,
Two days later he was back the same,
You thought you were the one to blame.

He thought the relationship was getting too serious
And that you had become a little too curious.
By this time you knew it wouldn't last,
All the nice things he said were in the past.

You thought that you would marry him some day,
But this time God wanted to get his way.
You wanted things back how they were before,
But you knew this couldn't happen anymore.

It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock,
You heard the news and it wasn't a shock.
You knew this was going to happen soon,
As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Praiser]

This what i call lust blinding the heart for feeling to not see that love is by faith when the spirit is not look a first , but the flesh , you see where things went wrong to enemy to love, lust' this what say in this piece very true talk, real poetry

[I Am Svetlana]

I really liked this piece. I liked how you explained the start of the relationship and the downfall of it, how it fell to pieces. These types of relationships can ruin a person, literally. They can keep you wondering, and drive your mind crazy to the point of no return. You ask questions that don't end up getting answered because you are being too curious and then you end up being blamed for the ending of the relationship. A person shouldn't be blamed for being curious, it's a part of who we are. But the ending was powerful, not gonna lie. That even when that type of thing happens, the girl still feels the way she always has for him...her feelings never change, no matter how much he hurts her or ends up putting her down.

[Worms]

very nice
good topic, somthing tht a lot of peoplecan relate to
very nice rythm and undertone