moon and sun

 the sun and moon together forever once u see the moon and sun to together for the one time you see things different with ur eye it the feeling most powerful in ur body the light and dark together for a short time it just something you do not see everyday...........

Reviews

[Legion]

You have really cool ideas in your pieces, but I would suggest working on your presentation just a bit. They feel like they want to go all over the place. I was much the same way years ago when I first began to write. Takes a while to redirect one's energy and learn to control the flow with pinpoint precision. But it can be done.

[Mariana Silva]

You're the first person I've seen thus far who has attempted to write in prose...you may want to go back and at least add some grammar because as a prose poem, this works very well.