no air

no air

A Poem by twilightgir123
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no air with out you

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 i  want to see you but you do not want to see me .  i cannot breath with out you you are my everything but you do not care about that why am i so diffrent from you i will always love you till the day i die...

i wish you were here with me but you hate me but i still love you everyday......

© 2008 twilightgir123


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I love you and you dont care about me. see how it works?



Posted 16 Years Ago


Yeah i think that is the most terrible feeling associated with relationship, when you feel for someone and that person is completely on the contrary side of it...and indeed it feels like suffocating. I have know how it feels like....and indeed you have portrayed that in the most least of words.
indeed this piece is strong and deep,thank for sharing and you are most welcome.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 13, 2008

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