not 'just friends' anymore

falling for your best friend!

never before,

did i see it

never before,

did i imagine this

 

his smile so sly,

his eyes so shy

his hands so warm

as they drop to grip my waist

 

my head, it spins

and my body, it wins

as i reach to pull him close

 

a dezire so strong

it took me so long

just the feel of him there...

i was hooked

 

his dark, blue eyes, took hold of mine

as i leaned in closer to him.

 

I'd known him so long

but i didn't feel wrong

to want to press my lips against his

 

so thats what i did

i did what i wanted

no longer teased

no long taunted

 

just me and him

both of us

together

 

my heart no longer tore

i guess, we're not, 'just friends'

anymore.

Reviews

[tora]

nice poem

[Foxtrot206]

Nice rhythm, and very cute. It gives the reader a good sensation of what the speaker feels. :)
Could I get your opinion on some of my own writing?

[unspokenguilt]

It has great flow and it's very sweet...Great write!

[Voice]

Very beautiful!!!! This is a very romantic and moving poem. you have quite a talent for poetry. Just a wonderful write...

Voice