Never

this is a poem i wrote about loving a friend

soap burns my cuts of pain
it's like walkin n da rain but i still feel dirty
but don't worry i'll thank u for dat
it was sumthin about u dat had me wrapped up and sprung
but now da spot u deserve iz not #1
we bet on my life and u won
and all i wanted 2 c was the sunshine
but u took the happiness from my eyes
cuz i rather lie with the snakes
cuz u won't b the 1 diggin ma grave
i used 2 rant and rave that love is tru
yea that we were meant 2 b
but now i see love is jus a falicy that's gotten the best of me
so i cut the shackles cuz slavery is a antonmy 4 free
my wrists may b bloody but atleast there's happiness n me
the entity of life iz lost within me
and u on dis parinoid tip
every 5 sec. u accusin me of havin dis imaginary dip like u don't b wit me
so i'm givin u ma hat bac so we can just b friends
it the lover's trial nd tribultaion it's finally cum 2 an end
so that's y i get silent when u say u love again
because i never want 2 love a friend

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ahmad Alhour]

Honesly...
Your poem is deep... simple... emotional master-peice...
But my friend you need to know the vield face behind the mask of your lover...
Honesly...
It almost made me to throw some tears of past away...

Good job...
Keep up the good stuff...