vampire

Slim and white,
fangs sharp as a knife,
when night time comes,
for her it's time to take your life,
black silk cape,
tight leather clothes,
your blood,
is what she swallows,
sun time she sleeps in her cave,
all alone in the pitch black,
but night time her work begins,
you can't escape her forceful attack,
two holes are left,
in a body so cold,
then she goes back to her cave,
to sleep all alone,
a smile never crosses her black lips,
a love flame never appears in her black heart,
when it comes to eating your blood,
she is very smart,
the devil's slave,
full of misery,
a vampire,
for all eternity,
behold the wickedness of it,
when she kills you,you become one too,
so don't stay out night,
or she will get you,
silk white skin,
not smooth but bony,
but what do you expect,
a vampire to look like who lives for eternity,
watch your back,
when night cover day,
she'll kill you,
a vampire's slay,
the devil's slave,
full of misery,
a vampire,
for all eternity.................

Reviews

[V.N. LaVay]

I enjoy the way you've portrayed a vampire here. The writing becomes a bit choppy in some places but you have much potential. I enjoy reading your work.