high school

its about going to highschool, im not really afraid of highschool but my brother was so i got a peom off that :)

This Day has haunted me, this day i dread, when i think of it i want to cry!    I need your love, support and kindness here with me so i dont have to go alone!   we have to do it someday :) it might not be bad :P but if your not here with me its going to be sad :(

People say it scary, its fun! But i dont believe them i just want to run! i dont want you to leave me and not be my friend!   we need to stick it out till the very end.       If we do this together it will be sinch :)          But what if they'res bullies whp punch and pinch?    you know what if we do it together we'll atleast have each other :)because you'll be here with me :)

Author's Note

hii just tell me what you think bad comments allowed :) i did this one in a nick of time so its a bit rough ( if you know what i mean ) :) well thanks for reading :P

Reviews

[-Aurelia Mirella]

I agree with the others..this was really good! But try to spereate the lines, and even though I love them, I try to lose some of the smiles. They break up your flow.

Well done! :]

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

[anneliese]

i liked it and enjoyed it.
seperate line would be nice and maybe less smileys
i wasn't afraid of high school either.

[Aly]

Its pretty cool (Y)
You should make seperate lines though, to make it less confusing.
Good job ^^