A Thrilling Love Poem

A Thrilling Love Poem

A Poem by Patrick Bienert
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The title says it all.

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I love you!
Do you love me too?

I thought you did.

We were together for so long,

and nothing could absolutely go wrong.

But what happened?

You loved somebody else and left me,

without any explanation why you did this to me.

You didn’t know how hurt I was,

you were selfish, merciless, and heartless,

you didn’t even care how hurt I was.

Not until I kidnapped you while on your way home,

brought you to a place you will never forget.

I studied your terrified expression while slowly sliding the blade of my knife down your neck,

An event you will never forget.

I plunged the knife into your chest and watched you wail in excruciating agony,

Suddenly feeling extremely sorry.

I lost my mind, completely bothered with what I did,

I took the knife and stabbed myself until I completely lost vision,

I’m really sorry my love that I have done this,

but I will never forget your betrayal,

be as it may in the depths of hell.

© 2008 Patrick Bienert


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Added on October 6, 2008

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Patrick Bienert
Patrick Bienert

Manila, Philippines



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I am Patrick Bienert, seventeen years of age from Metro Manila, Philippines. I am Eurasian - half Filipino, half German. I am into writing novels - usually in the Fantasy-Suspense genre. Please do re.. more..

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