Thoughts on "L"

Thoughts on "L"

A Poem by Jamie
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I like to use "L" instead of saying love like people say "F" instead of f**k.

"

 

I see them holding hands
but their kiss is awkward
And I'm not the only one
who can tell 

 

He doesn't know what it is
and the L word makes her nauseous
I know them too well
to believe their lies

 

The only people
who talk about their
"relationship"
don't really have one.
If it was real,
they would just shut the f**k up
and fall in love.

© 2008 Jamie


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HA! I chuckled AND identified with this one...who knows why love waits and why sometimes it doesnt. Why do we sometimes jump in too fast with the wrong person, then wait with the right? Love is too damn hard.

Great job!
You got my mind going...
Jason

Posted 16 Years Ago


It's all a part of maturity, I tell you.

I like the ending.
Very straight and to the point.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 10, 2008
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Jamie
Jamie

Ann Arbor, MI



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I am a third-year student at the University of Michigan - Ann Arbor, double-majoring in Creative Writing & Literature and Environmental Writing. I am in the process of publishing a book of poetry but.. more..

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