Unreachable

Kind of a random poem I wrote :P Not sure what inspired me.

An ocean away,

A world apart;

How can i hold,

Your far away heart.

I don't think you see,

Just what you mean

To this little girl

With a broken dream.

Reviews

[Aarea]

Hmmmm how sad. I hope she can find her love. This was good, I feel like you didn't waste any words. Good job.

[The Violent Wolf]

thank you ^__^