Your different

A poem I wrote about a guy

Nothing compare to how I feel about you

your different than any other guy I met

Your sweet, fun and your real

you ain't afraid to hide you emotions

When you mad, sad or happy you show it

your you and I wouldn't Change a thing

I wish I can have you but  do you want me?

I believe you like me

maybe a little or maybe a lot I don't know

Your an amazing guy

and you deserve the world

i never felt like this before I meet you

But the question is how do you feel about me?

Author's Note

Plzzz tell me what you think and I'll thing of everything you say and try to make this poem better for you

Reviews

[Endless Rain]

This is extremely cute, real, open, and filled with a whole lotta love. This poem is very poetic and straight from your heart, Fantastic!

[Enigma]

Whoa!! I'm speechless... All of this has been going on and on in my head and it was impossible to put in to words. But you've done a great job here. Jotted it all down just the way it makes you feel inside. You didn't wind the truth but rather, said it out in a straight tone/
This poem is cute, sweet, lovely, romantic and red...lolz
It's hard to believe the resemblence it has with me... OMG!!
Just a bit of suggestion, in the 7th line,
"I wish I can have you but I do you want me?", don't you think there's a n extra 'I' there...??
Anyway, I loved it!! It was splendid!! Well penned!!
Keep writing, you know the job well.... ^_^