Dream

I see the moon and the stars at night
When I see your face I dream of you but when i don't my dreams turns into nightmares
I love everything about you and I don't want you to change
i love your eyes, your smile, the way you laugh
you
In the morning your the first thing i think of and the last thing on my mind at night
i don't think I would ever forget you
No matter what  you think of me
No matter what I still dream of you.

 

Reviews

[Michael Kerr]

it was beautiful. i love the way it was writing. the feeling put into it. plus i really
connect and can relate to this poem. like i say this poem is great. i encourage
you to keep writing. write what you feel or have experienced. all my work is
from what has happened in the past or what is going on right now in my life.
GREAT JOB!

keep writing
-mike-

[Wendy]

Hmmmmm I wonder who this is about?HODGES?

[Ari]

I would suggest a cleaner font just so that people can read this easier, but I really enjoyed the sentiment that you are expressing here.

[Hotel Mornings]

this is melancholy but in a good way. make sure you watch your contractions: "In the morning your the first thing i think of." your should be changed to you're. It's not a huge typo but it sucked me out of your poem for a second. I love the line, "I don't want you to change," because I definitely have felt that about many people...too bad people can't help but change.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Very nicely written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Broken.]

This is nice and very sweet.

Like you would always dream and not let anything crush you

[WordMaster]

What a marvelously written piece of writing

I enjoyed each word and line; I could feel the emotion as I came to the end

Nicely done�

[Madeline Sime]

its a pretty good poem.