I love. . .

 I love the way you can see the beauty within me,

that sometimes I can't even see.

 

I love the way you look into my eyes

and seem to stare into my soul.

 

I love the way you run your hand through your hair,

and how it just falls back into place.

 

I love the way you smell,

and your laugh after I say so.

 

I love the way you run your hand along my back,

erasing the burden and hurt.

 

I love the way you kiss,

for anything else disappears.

 

I love the stories you tell me,

and watching how animated you become.

 

I love how you accept my flaws and mistakes,

and how you don't let that get in the way.

 

I love how you are always there to help me back up,

or to steady my clumsy ways.

 

I love how you wrap your arm around me,

unafraid to tell the world I'm yours.

 

I love how amazing you are,

and how you always put me first.

 

I love so many things about you,

but above all,

 

I love how you love me back.

Author's Note

Something I came up with one day about a special someone!

Reviews

[Jade Mayhew]

This was incredibly sweet. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It made me think of my own special someone and our feelings for each other. A very good read. Thank you SO much for sharing!!! Keep writing... you've got a lot of talent.

~Jade Mayhew.

[Helena]

A very special and beautiful heartfelt write for that special someone.
Thank you for submitting this to my "A Chance to Shine Contest" ~ Helena

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Thanks for the submission. Nicely done

[Lydia]

Really, a beautiful poem. I enjoyed it :)

[DiggeyEleven]

It was a nice read, you can see how ever word is truly filled with love. One line really struck me:

I love the way you run your hand along my back,
erasing the burden and hurt.

Beautiful, and the most powerful passage there, your choice of words was perfect. I would say try to be a bit more descriptive when it comes to your love for this person. Tell us how it burns in your soul, how you heart aches for them, quivers and shakes. How else do they show their, love describe that person, their touch, their smell. I know you can strike us down even harder, that one line still ringing in my head. Keep it up because you have the talent.

[xGenevaxx]

awe, that's very adorable,3 i lalalove it. its so cute. i can see it me and my loved one. even if it is a dream i see, cos you know he isnt mine. hahaa, [x anyways hope everything is good for you and all goes well with you and your loved one hahahaa, [X