Days go by...

Days go by...

people die.....

people cry....

then....

days go bye, you're left behind....

awaiting your turn in line....

everyday ends in death....

it's what life is...

from the day you take your first breath....

it's constant...

it's lifes ONE guarantee....

in given life, we are, condemned...

the end.....

Reviews

[lee]

Very thoughtful.
Thanks,

[Trigorin]

You have a good concept but check your grammar, and I'd really suggest getting rid of all the ellipses. It doesn't look very focused and it makes the flow a bit too drawn-out and laborious, I think.

[deaths calling]

i liked it and that is true

[Angie]

Thank you, and yes, sadly it is true.

[deaths calling]

your welcome