Cave Dweller

Confined and enslaved below

Adapting and forced to grow

Vicious struggle of will

Empowered by each kill

Devour those deemed weak

Wretched master of the meek

Enslaved to sick desire

Leaping into the fire

Losing all past constraint

Empowered fallen saint

Ruler of the dark

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)................

[turbochainsaw]

thank you very much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................

[Relic]

This is awesome. I like the little bits of alliteration and the depth of the words and your delivery of them. Great poem. Going into my favorites.

[turbochainsaw]

thank you very much

[Rob Santana]

I like this piece. Reads like some killer metal lyrics.

[turbochainsaw]

thanks.most of my writing experience comes from writing metal lyrics in bands I have been in over the years