Love

Love

A Poem by Tumi
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“Love (SIJO)”

Love, a beaming light that forever lights aflame my heart.
Lust, as cool as autumn's frozen palm that eases burden’s harsh hold.
Your love, both a burning ice, strong as steel, brings me to light.

© 2024 Tumi


Author's Note

Tumi
Feel free, first time I'm trying the Korean SIJO

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Love finely penned! Thank you for sharing...

Posted 1 Week Ago


This is one amazing write here!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Tumi

1 Week Ago

thanks for the warm review
Really good Tumi, love and lust working in tandem, good stuff. Thank you for sharing

Posted 1 Week Ago


Tumi

1 Week Ago

thanks a lot, i'm glad you enjoyed reading
Odd, I have always thought of lust as blazing hot.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago



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Added on October 30, 2024
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Tumi
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lagos, christian, Nigeria



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