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Seeing love after a long time

As the sun glares deeply below the horizon, casting lustful golden eyes on the pavement, there she sits�"my ultimate goal. Her eyes shine brighter than the stars; jealousy creeps beneath the sun’s hot grasp. Her face, just like before, haunts my tired nights and fills my dreams.

The breeze buzzes like bees, and silence envelops us. Her gaze flits to her phone while my heart pounds with love, each beat echoing my longing.

Her eyes, the same as moonlight, sparkle in the twilight. Rosy, curly lips�"how I recall them on dreamy nights. Her soft chin, fondly remembered from my sleep, remains unchanged.

Those intense eyes, cool and inviting, cascade down her shoulders like a gentle waterfall. My own eyes grow older, yet her hands remind me of a rose, blooming at sunrise, fragrant with soft jellies.

They rest upon her shoulders, trailing down to her covered feet, and all of it mesmerizes me. I love her always�"maybe forever, maybe till time itself dies.

Author's Note

my first Prose poem, your critiques are well embraced

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem for love Tumi. When glances and smiles lead us to love. We can find happiness. Thank you for my friend for sharing the amazing poetry for love and hope.
Coyote

[Tumi]

thanks for reviewing it means alot

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure Tumi and you are welcome.

[Abida~]

That was such a lovely description. Such fine feelings of love are described through your prose.
Good work!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I agree with Marie....this has coloful language and stark imagery that puts in the setting watch her sit, filled with love and being someone we want to love.
j.

[Marie]

Lovely depiction in the narrative prose poem. The story is finely told to the reader in sweet, warm, tender words. Feelings are finely expressed too. Nice work! Thank you for sharing, Tumi...