A Star

A STAR

 

My mind well opened

As I watched with gloom

The night was so cold

As the cool breeze blew

I saw the grin

When I look up to the sky

I saw the smile

As I looked up to the moon

 

I saw a star

Its glitters were like diamonds

I found a star

Her eyes are like almonds

I found a gem

With a beauty so rare

As precious, a pearl

But what can I compare?

 

The scent of the rose

Was as fresh as dawn

The smile in my nose

As I sniffed on and on

The scent a tad

To the beauty of your skin

Its fairness a bit

As little as a thing

I found the sea as crystal as clear

As calm as a dove

But rage is near

With crumbles and mumbles

That strikes my heart

But I chose to watch,

In a twinkle or flash

The heat that followed

Were like a furnace that burns

The coolness, a brunch

Like an ice or more

But its fairness a tad

To your beauty my queen

 

I went to the north,

But I found no soul

I searched the east

The nooks and holes

I found no one

With a eyes as charming

I found no soul

With a smile as lovely

In Your tongues were like honey

I ought to lick

In your lips a taste

I found too sweet

Your voice like gods

Your tongue, oh God

Your words like sword

That pins my throat

It touches my soul

When you spoke a bit

My love for you

Is like a bird that flee

My love so true

Like a mine that shines

My love for you

Like an ember

Shining through the beauty of the tired night

My love forever

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Lovable scenes you created. Enjoyed your poem

[emmajoygreen]

Glowing words start to finish, thoughts saved safe on both heart and mind. Protect them as you would truly heartfelt imaginings

'I saw a star
Its glitters were like diamonds
I found a star
Her eyes are like almonds
I found a gem
With a beauty so rare
As precious, a pearl'

Seems you found purity..

[Marie]

A very beautiful romantic write, sweet and lovingly penned in this poem. The poet can find nothing suitable to compare his lady love to, because she is unique and nothing can compare to her. Lovely imagery in this narrative write which is finely penned and well expressed. Thank you for sharing, timu. Lovely work!

[Tatenda Chivhondo]

This is a very good piece!