how i wish you knew how much i love you

 

HOW I WISH YOU KNEW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU

 

How I wish you knew

How much I loved you

Those Cheeky cheeks

And Scary looks

Your disdainful eyes

Still has a fairy’s charm

 

The hate I see

when I try to say hi

The river I cry

When you refuse to be mine

The heat of pain

Had melt my heart

Your coldness

A crush, to what I felt

In my heart

But my heart feels like the strongest wind

For I love you

Even with your hateful speech

My heart still spots a smile

In your frown

My love so young

I love you till now

My love for you

A rainbow

Always beautiful

In winter, summer

In spring, beyond that

In the sky, the lovely stars

In your eyes

The pretty smile

 

A love so big

My heart could lift

A love so strong it stands

A thousand feet

A love so much

Beyond the level of the sea

A love as such

It starts to live

It breathes the air

Through that smile

In your eyes

While I prey from the rear

If smiles through those chin

With such beauty

None ever seen

It looks so lovely

So soft, so much

So tough, so smooth

So tall, from the foot

So high, beyond all might

So great I can’t say

So rich

None can take

So sweet, the sweetest treat

So real

It grows when you touch me

 

 

How I wish you knew

How much I loved you

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Marie]

A poignant read filled with emotion! Love for a girl so beautifully expressed. I feel she knows exactly how much you love her, tumi! She's just playing hard to get, but deep down she knows and loves you deeply too. Finely inked romantic write, sweet, warm and tender. Lovely work! Thank you for sharing, tumi...

[Ayvid N]

Once they read this poem, they'll definitely appreciate the depths of love expressed by you. We make love what it is. Turning it into a boundless ocean or a stagnant pond of rot. The love described here is the former kind of love that strives for eternity. Excellent poem, Tumi.

[tumi]

Thanks so much
For the kind review
It means a lot

[Arundass TP]

Very muscical. . excellently written poem. Very touching.

[Jerry Ables]

These are good and powerful words, Tumi. I enjoyed the read very much. Richest blessings to you and yours! :)

[berenongur]

It is not ethical to you write a poem with my feelings to the person I love. you are a poet

[tumi]

thanks for the review
it means alot