Charming Glare

Charming Glare

A Poem by tumi
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Love and romance

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CHARMING GLARE

 

You locked my eyes

With your charming glare

You stole my heart

With the way you stare

Your eyes and smile

Were my day and night

Your blond curly hair

Always made me lose my sight

Your soft touches

And lovely words

The soft chuckles

And frequent blush

My heart was stolen by an angel

Of a girl

My eyes have known you

You, cute charming girl

With the beauty of an art

Love was found in my eyes

my mind was touched

By that lovely smile

Of yours

Your words and songs

A deeply dug love

In our midst

I found My jokes and poems

Were like words of a knight

As you laughed and fell

You were locked in my arms

Your skin, your teeth

As lovely as it is

Your chin, Your cheeks

The slaps and the kicks

Your hug, your talks

In your head, I put a kiss

My mind was struck

By love,

 

Truth or dare

We never care

you made me profess

and I made it clear

how much I love you

© 2024 tumi


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The joy of love is finely inked in this lovely, warm, sweet and romantic poem, tumi. A very charming write, delightfully penned. Thank you for sharing, Tumi...

Posted 1 Month Ago


This is a very lovely piece. I truly enjoyed it and found myself immersed in the vivid imagery you created. The beauty of your writing really resonated with me.

Posted 1 Month Ago


A very sweet, warm, tender write which is so heartwarming to read, Tumi. Like Neville, I prefer a plain font which is easier to read. You narrate the joy of falling in love so finely. Lovely work! Thank you for sharing...

Posted 2 Months Ago


tumi

2 Months Ago

Thanks for the kind review
And I will make sure to work on the font
Mariej

2 Months Ago

Most welcome always, Tumi...
A very romantic
and emotional
poem! 👍
Articulately penned
and my pleasure
to read indeed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

Posted 2 Months Ago


tumi

2 Months Ago

Thanks for the kind review
The talk of affection when least expected makes it worth it. Charming.

Posted 2 Months Ago




This is really quite delightful .. My only gripe and its a little one, is the font proved a little difficult for me to read .. Neville

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 15, 2024
Last Updated on July 15, 2024
Tags: love, romance, feelings

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tumi
tumi

lagos, christian, Nigeria



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