A Flood Of Love

A FLOOD OF LOVE

 

He cracked his throat

He swallowed very hard

He stares as though

His eyes would pop out

He summoned some courage

They came in diverse ways

He stood as firm

His tones were sweet

His word like chevalier

The voice was deep

As he tried to be sweet

He moved across

Almost falling in a pit

He relaxed his urge

And made his way

to crossed her path

But her beauty strikes

Like lightening

While he marveled in his heart

He tried to remain cool

But seems like a fool

Her beauty was too good

It ought to be true

He tried some words

But they came in whispers

He tried to cough

To make it quicker

She stares at him

With her eyes in fright

She glares as if

The day were night

She smiled and blush

How nervous he was

The sweats that drops

A flood of love
she touches his hands

She sends quick shivers

She held his arm

His heart ran like a beamer

Her words as soft

Her beauty as tough

Her eyes still shines

Like the stars of a knight

 

She smashed silence creeping

Through the mood of romance

Touches his cheeks

And asks him

How much he loves her

 

He sweats made a stop

But there lay a flood of love

In his heart

The breaths were gone

He gathers few words or phrases

His mind recalls

He stutters,

He mutters

To express the words

In the heart,

I… love…

you….

Beyond…. all…

Imagination

 

The story ends

Like a cat and dog

His words were stress

As he pends her response

She stared, with tears

How long she waited

For the love to come

And it stands right there,

Begging to be loved

 

The flood of love

Filled my heart

The joy of a companion

Puts a smile

In my eyes

Author's Note

dreams might come through any moment
critiques? Feelings
what do you think?

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[Soren]

A great metaphor here. Loved the imagery in this poem and how it was woven with the metaphor. The rhyme enhanced the whole effect. Very nice

[Tumi]

thanks for the kind review
happy you enjoyed reading

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Powerful.

[Tumi]

thanks for the review
i' m glad you enjoyed reading

[Marie]

Yes, when we least expect it, dreams do come true sometimes. A nicely penned poem, Tumi. Feelings well expressed. I like the layout of the poem too. You narrate the story finely, it is quite atmospheric. Lovely work! Thank you for sharing...

[Tumi]

thanks for the kind review
it means alot