My Love For You

MY LOVE FOR YOU

How much do I love you?

Can I say

I love you as truly

From the depth

And strength and might

Through the flow of blood in my veins

Till the top of my mind

I love you as the joy of every days

My love for you

As the beauty of Christmas day

 

 

I love you as the love

Of eternal life

Through our love

We shall live till the crawling

Of the tired night

I love you as the beauty

of eternal rest

my love is godly

my love for you is first

 

I love you as meekly

As I hide and shy

I love you as freely

as the flow of Nile

I love you as newly

As the birth of man

My love for you as pure

I can’t tell lies

 

My love for you

as the heat of the sun

That keeps the flowers fresh

My love for you as strong

With the touch

And the pounds of your flesh

My love for you as pure

 With the ocean’s love

for the shore

with you

my love shall blossom the more

 

my love for you like winds

every breath shall feel

my love is neat

a love so true

 

my love for you, burns

in my heart the more

like the heat of a stove

it makes my love

my love for you as much

as the stars of the sky

my love enormous

the water of life

my love as rich

as golden mines

filled and ruling

in every minds

 

my love for you is till

the short of words

my love for you is true

I love you in every world

My love for you shall live

As breath never ceases

My love for you shall thrive

Over every phases

My love for you is as life

As long as am alive

Even at my death

My love shall be alive

In the world to come

I shall love you the more

If heaven permit me

I shall love you

Till thy kingdom come

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. Great writing.

[Tumi]

Thanks for the kind review

[Jerry Ables]

It's very nice and deep. I enjoyed the read very much. His richest blessings to you and yours! :)

[Tumi]

Thanks for the kind review
Am happy you enjoyed reading

[Jerry Ables]

You're very welcome! :)

[Amy R]

Oh my, a very romantic poem.
I enjoyed this piece to much...

"If heaven permit me
I shall love you
Till thy kingdom come" My fav lines, something I will find myself writing about to.

-Amy

[Tumi]

Thanks for the kind review

[Amy R]

You're welcome

[Thad]

A very romantic poetic pictorial,
very evocative and skillfully expressed!
Third stanza my favorite, inviting and refreshing!
Best regards my friend! Thad

[Tumi]

thanks for the review