Writers Cafe Our Comfort Zone

why don't we shun the clowns staining our white with their barbaric minds

WRITERS CAFÉ OUR COMFORT ZONE

With a touch of stain

Pureness was questioned

The comfort place

Now filled with terror

The honey’s sweetness dwindles

now

The lights fades

In the dark

 

Our comfort zone

Now a place of terror

Filled with clowns

Howling

Snorting

Now we only have to watch in horror

The heroes fled at the time of war

Living it clear for the cubs to roar

With their little teethes and tiny paws

The made themselves

Some barbaric lords

 

But I stand firm

With a mighty sword

To dismantle darkness

With my use of words

Wash of the stained in the walls of our home

We real writers should stand

And not flee

Raise our pens

And fight with it

Crushed the shadow of the dark

And write away the clowns

And their allies

 

Author's Note

to everyone on these website
our comfort zone now turning to a battled filled
with some barbarians and clowns drawing lines with their little hands
should we just let it be
feel free

Reviews

[Winslow Des Totes]

Wow. Poignant words left to echo in the void. I appreciate you using your art to express your frustration with what I assume are trolls whose favorite past time is to mock and put down so as to raise themselves (supposedly) higher. I too cannot stand people who think it's their right or duty to stand on the necks of those they deem less than. It's sick and represents the animal in us not the evolved intellectual ape with empathy and grace. We can all do better to lift those around us up instead! Thank you for that reminder

[Marie]

I would love an explanation for your words, Tumi as I am unaware of what you are speaking about. Kindly elaborate further. Thank you...

[tumi]

i seen not just once but a few reports of people fooling around and which includes yours which seems to me as an assault
divya's that as well from that i got to learn some people are here not really for the pleasure of writing

[Marie]

Oh, Davidgeo is a troll. He has caused a lot of trouble with years on various poetry sites. I take no notice of him. I have blocked him, but no doubt he will be back under another assumed name, then I shall block him again. Thank you so very much iTry. Wishing you a very blessed and beautiful evening to enjoy...

[tumi]

you are welcome
first i didn't wish to get involved the first time
but on it consistent i was disappointed how freely they did it without any one questioning them and i was told they could not be reported
its good you dont spear a thought for them
but i still had some lines
to give them if they see it
have a wonderful day

[tumi]

and am Tumi

[Marie]

Please forgive me, Tumi. I get mixed up sometimes with all the names, bless you.
Of course, anybody like Davidgeo can be reported, Tumi. I just wouldn't waste my energy doing that because he will come back again under another name. So, the best thing to do is keep blocking him. Gee asked Divya and I to comment on what he wrote about Davidgeo yesterday, because I was included by Davidgeo saying I am Divya, I had to write about who I am and that I am not dear Divya, whose poetic ability I could never come close to. I am so grateful that you are watching out for us, dear Tumi and thank you with a very appreciative heart. Bless you always...

[tumi]

you are welcome
there is no problem we all here for the sake of writing have a lovely day

[Marie]

Thank you so much and I too, wish you the same, Tumi...