I love you 2

How much do I love you?

Can I say?

 

“I love you from the depth and breath

And might

Deep down the streaming

Of bloods in my veins

To top of my mind

 

I love you as the joy of everyday

I love you than

The beauty of Christmas day

 I love you more

Than the beauty of eternal life

Through our love

We shall live till the crawling

Of the tired night

I love you till the cometh of everyday

The joy of my dreams

The wait for another day

 

My love for you as strong

as the heat of the sun

The coldness of ice

As the beauty of the sky

My love shines like an ember

In the dark

Just as shinny

As December

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Abida~]

How you have used metaphors and similes to describe your emotions makes me satisfied to read.

[Tumi]

thanks for the kind review abida

[Poetic Beauty]

The wording and the flow of this poem are smooth and written with care.

Oh the splendor of love and all that it allows us to feel deep within our beings. It’s spicy and serene at the same time. It can consume all that is within giving joy and excitement

[Tumi]

big thanks
on the review