my love, my queen

MY LOVE, MY QUEEN`

My love, my queen

an elegance so thick

Your eyes are wild

Like a honey

Your beauty so sweet

 

My love, my queen

Love flows like Nile

Through my veins

To my heart

it flies

From the bottom

 to the sky

flows

through your lovely eyes

glows

like rainbows in the sky

 

my eyes are blinded by love

with your hands

your beauty

with your words

you shall be guilty

for making a man mad

madly in love

with you

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Yari_J]

Such a wonderful poem describing a women, really fantastic

[Rosalie-O]

She sounds like one truly mesmerising woman and it is obvious from your words that you are completely hooked on her. The kind of words that most ladies would like to have written and expressed for them. Well done.

[Tumi]

thanks for the kind review
it makes me blush :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing dance of words for love. You gave hope to the emotion of love. I enjoyed every word written. Thank you tumi for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

[Tumi]

thanks for the review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Marie]

A very romantic, warm, tender poem exquisitely descriptive of someone so special in the poet's life. I love how you compare your Queen to the beautiful Nile and your love flows as effortlessly for her as the Nile flows so easily and smoothly into The Mediterranean Sea. So many comparisons and compliments for your love in this sublime write, Tumi. Feelings very finely expressed. I really love this poem! Thank you for sharing, dear poet...

[Tumi]

thanks for your kind word and review
dear marie

[Marie]

Most welcome always, Tumi... Have a very lovely evening and enjoy...