LOST IN LOVE

love poem

Seeing her lovely eyes                 

My mind races like a horse

To and fro

It beats for love

Bam bam bam

Like a Cherokee drum

 

Sweating from the toes

Like a dead goat

Smiling by myself

As I struck a pose

To impress

With words as

“You have the beauty of a queen

A lovely eye

Just as a heroine”

Were followed by giggles

Soft chuckles as I approach

To my dismay

My words resign

Leaving my eyes to profess

It left me be

Alone to meet a princess

 

Still looking as a clown

Frozen to the short of words

Expecting a frown

But what I got scalded my tongue

A voice comes like urgent whispers

The HI made my words come back

Still mumbling

She picks me a seat

Opening the door

To whatever it may be

She smiles

She whispers

Lost in her eyes

I lost my balance

Her touch made me froze

At her gesture and laughs

My feeling rose

Putting words in my mouth

I chose to let her have my heart

She stands to leave

But mutters to my relief

“Ever try, ever fail

No matter, try again

Fail again

Fail better”

She left me alone lost

Lost in love

 

Author's Note

funny while trying to profess feelings
what do you think?

Reviews

[AYVID N]

I loved this poem tumi. You're such an amazing love poet. Excellent work.

[Tumi]

:) thanks for the kind words divya
love poet
is it good enough?

[Coyote Poetry]

If we don't attempt love. We may never know if could be. I liked the effort and honest thoughts. Old wise saying. Better to lose at love than to never had loved. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Tumi]

thanks for the nice review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.