should i stop loving

SHOULD I STOP LOVING

Should I stop loving you

So the jealous day won’t drive away our love

Number your days

to the verge of your last words

 

Even so, in your eternal slumber

My love shall speak

Blossoming from deeply in the soil

In the grieve of a beloved

 

The whimpers from the earth

At the severed ties of two love birds

The grief of the sea,

Flowing through the rivers,

The Dams and the streams

Over the loss of a beloved

It shall flow

But with bitterness

Everywhere it goes

Till the giver of life

In agony, arises your soul

To live in the glory of love

Author's Note

what do you think? free to express

Reviews

[Sapphus]

Love is always a good bet. Well written.

[Tumi]

Thanks for the review

[AYVID N]

I felt the profound pain of losing a lived one to death. I also felt the hope in your words and a prayer for resurrection. I relate deeply as it's a very universal emotion to yearn for a reunion with a dead loved one. You did a wonderful job of expressing such feelings here.

[Tumi]

thanks for reading divya