the heart of a man

the heart of a man

A Poem by Tumi
"

what lies in a man's very heart

"

 

THE HEART OF A MAN

Could the heart of man be flawless?

Pure as the infant’s slumber

Could a man be without sin

Or wrong,

With the Fear of the unseen

 

Shall a man’s very heart

Be strong

To shudder at the lust crossing his path

Could the heart of man prevail?

Against the urge of the flesh

Been it frail

Like the feathers of a dove

Weak and full of sin

The heart of a man

In it lies rivers of iniquity

© 2024 Tumi


Author's Note

Tumi
the heart of man is filled with too many flaws
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You asked many questions. Every man will question himself tumi.
"Like the feathers of a dove
Weak and full of sin
The heart of a man
In it lies rivers of iniquity"
I did like the above lines. I do believe. Good men will make mistakes. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. You did well. You made the reader ponder and think.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


A beautiful poem full of queries on the challenges faced by the heart of man. Filled with pure contemplation and thoughts of positivity. Great work, tumi.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tumi

5 Months Ago

thanks for the review divya
Beautifully written poem . Excellent 👍

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tumi

5 Months Ago

thanks for the review

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