bitter remains the heart

bitter remains the heart

A Poem by Tumi
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sentimental

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BITTER REMAINS THE HEART

Bitter

Remains the heart

 

Like the war lords of the ancients

Sorrow besieged my minds

 

The feelings of love

Makes me sad

 

The thoughts loosing you,

My worlds now hard

 

In your eyes

Lies a delight

 

In your smile

Arises the pleasure of my mind

 

Why make a soft love hard?

The feelings in your heart

Speak through the smile in your eyes

Love

It creeps through the back

Of your mind

To profess,

But in my sleep,

I hear it

In a trance

Or in a dream

It speaks to me

 

My heart is heavy

But weak

In it

There lies nothing

But Love for you

© 2024 Tumi


Author's Note

Tumi
love can mess up your hear so much
even words can't express it all
what do you all think?

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Sadness start to finish, yet finely laid for sharing. It is when in bed lying awake that pain creeps into the mind . From there inward and onward into your dreams. Dreams once felt so precious: a sleeping echo to your day-bright love. All willing, time will come when life settles back to be what you so truly need.. but, patience for now. Sincerely wishing you a future of brighter and happier days, tumi

Posted 5 Months Ago


Tumi

5 Months Ago

thanks for the kind review
emmajoygreen

5 Months Ago

You are very welcome
Love can end bitterly but the heart goes on loving. We cannot convince the heart to stop loving. This is a very beautiful poem. Excellent work tumi.

Posted 5 Months Ago



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Added on June 7, 2024
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