dreams

Sentimental

Hopes calls for a better world

Our dreams shudder

For its been so long

Bitterness was our songs

Frustrations in our words

 

But,

With a glimmer of light

Darkness fades

A drop of water

An ocean made

Success smiles

Dreams came through

Lots of hopes

Passion fulfilled

 

 

Author's Note

feelings?

Reviews

[Judie Blonde]

You used a lot of very interesting literary devices. ‘Our dreams shudder’
But I think you can definitely tone up your poetry, and really sharpen these unique word formations to create a more powerful poem later.

[berenongur]

"Bitterness was our songs
Frustrations in our words"
wooww loved it. this so sweet and sincere. have the best day