beauty

beauty

A Poem by Tumi
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love

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BEAUTY

As the shimmering sun sets eyes on your skin,

I behold the uniqueness of your beauty

what more could nature boast of

than the beauty of your form

 

for now, do I see the aesthetic in your eyes

the glittering star were the fortress of your beauty

day breaks from being curious to behold

does the night get jealous of your fame?

 

your elegance has brought many into the world of obsession

as your solemn voice sweetens the ears of the head of Paris

does the night wait no more to behold your beauty?

adorned with stunning scent made to praise your name

I come unto you my paradise

 

In the delight to see you glory

the princes of the world tremble

 

till death will I sing your praise

even in my eternal rest will I praise your name

 

© 2024 Tumi


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Oooh! I adore the echoing theme of beauty throughout the metaphors and descriptors that you use. Great job!

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Tumi

5 Months Ago

thanks a lot for the review
That last line is majestic as hell. The eternal glory of Love and Beauty.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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