secret admirer 3

love poem

OBSESSED AT FIRST SIGHT

Got into the bar to clear my head

Booze, booze and booze

Till I look almost dead

Behold my blurry eyes fell on what I could less have imagined

Tried clearing my vision

But she said ‘hey there’

My mouth now dry

My tongue stuck between my teeth

Still figuring out to compose my self

She made her way at my side

My legs wobble and my mouth sore

My breath began to cease

Trying to gather some fresh lines

Unable to speak

Looking more like a drunk freak

For She stole my heart at first sight

No one as looked more alluring

For her looks got many thinking

Couldn’t sleep all night

Thinking about what seemed more like a trance

She took over my dreams

 Can’t stop thinking about the angelic face

She got me thinking for days

Obsessed am I

 

Author's Note

for the one who stole my heart at first sight

Reviews

[Beren Ongur]

there is a story here, i want to read
a movie i am dying to watch
but at the same time it feels like i have seen this scenario before, it feels so close, so familiar.
damn tell me this story ends well!

perfect narration i am tired of saying the same things every time but i am not bored reading every part over and over. no matter what i say to someone who expresses his feelings so well, it feels empty!

[Tumi]

It was just imaginary, as I remember, I just thought about it and put it down,
I think then I never looked forward to refinement, just
Write and paste,

I'm glad you enjoyed reading

[Beren Ongur]

you are THE TALENT.

[Aleena]

Depicts the confusion of an obsession