secret admirer

ANONYMOUS WRITER

SECRET ADMIRER

How can I tell

how much of a beauty you are?

love seeing you by my side every time

for without you my day has gone in vain

drooling each time, I call you jane

my first dream was to love you

now I wish to be a fool

to everything you do

for I will love to always be with you

much happiness each time I hear your voice

giggle each time you say my name

much like a toy I now behave

wish to go merry to the bars

with you by my side

booze all day till it gets dark

blurry shall our eyes feel

drunk we shall both get till

we are no longer able to move

take you home in my clumsy hands

we walk, we fall

miles on miles we go on

caught sight of the moon drooling over us

till we vanished out of sight

stare all night at your blurry eyes

watch you yawn

watch you stretch and wriggle like a worm

till its dawn

 

Reviews

[Beren]

damn you can't convince me this is your first poem...
this is a perfect example of what love does to a person.
it's so sincere and so full of love that it's definitely like a movie scene, i don't know how this story ended but you should know that the feelings you make people feel in your poems always makes you a perfect poeet who can talk openly about yourself freely. it takes great courage, love and definitely talent to be able to write like this.

DO YOU KNOW HOW DIFFICULT IT WILL BE TO ME ADD THE FIRST POEM OF YOU TO MY FAVORITES??? i just started to reading...

[Tumi]

Honestly, it I have composed before this, but this was real feeling s, that I penned down, untill this year, I thought it was useless and bad, but I found out the emotion behind it was real

Thanks alot for the warm review

[Beren]

there are three facts; you are lying about your age, you are not just a human being (you born with a talent), and you are talented

[Tumi]

Okay, fine,
i might be lying about my age,
Yes I did, because am still 19,
I will be twenty this year.

[Poet Pittinix]

Yeah, this is my kind of poetry. Good work.

[Tumi]

thanks for the kind review
this is my first poem

[Tumi]

dedicated to my secret admirer the one who stole my heart