Rhythm of love (recuerdo de amore)

an expression of love

A kiss, if kisses can make your heart beat so fast

Send millions of wonderful emotions and thoughts

Then kiss every part and send passion with every touch

Hush, hear the sound of time, strode in the rhythm of love

Breath deep with desire, open up, let the moment gently pass

Take all the time, slowly put the puzzle piece, but feel the rush of urgency

Hold tight in the rapid sway of winds, in the midst of bursting love and gush of flames

Close thy eyes savour the warm splendor of blinding light so bright. Oh! My love, kiss me tonight

Author's Note

tidbits: i was intoxicated with love when i wrote this
to all: enjoy & pls share your thougts about this
tenkyu for reading :)

Reviews

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
An excellent poem painted with word brush strokes of vibrant color. A write well done.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[Xia Murphy]

While I'm usually not one for fluffy love poems, this one is all right. I mean I wouldn't read it everyday, since like I mentioned before I'm not into love poems, but I'd definitely choose it if I felt in a fluffy mood.

[pia Z]

Awww yeah! You gotta love a poem that captures how sweet and hot it is to be perfectly kissed by someone who knows how! Love it! :)

[Shadow Spirit]

It is wonderful writing. I enjoyed it very much, and I am sure that if I could feel some emotion right now I would. Thank you for sharing this with all of us.
(p.s. It's not your fault that I'm feeling no emotion right now, I have just shut down inside, is all -.-')
~ShadowSpirit

[SimonitroX]

This is such a wonderful, innocent, and beautiful poem that shows the true meaning of love. Love should take its time when you're in a relationship and getting to know each other (but not too long).

That kiss that goes through the vibes of your spine that submits you in that moment that feels eternity is heavenly. The blossom of thy heart splendors within. Anyway, awesome job. :)

[Xx_Belle_Emo_xX]

wonderful poem (:

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. I look back into the past. I remember the kissing and holding tight. When the only thing that was important was being close to the person you needed and loved. A amazing poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

Your poem has a consuming quality to it. The longing for the obe you love is always a great subject to linger upon.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Oh, that lucsious, fruitful, juicy, and powerful kiss!! Great poem!

[Inyourshadow]

Then kiss every part and send passion with every touch ~ ah is there nothing quite so sweet as a simple kiss, would seem not after reading your romantic poetry, you capture the emotion of love shared beautifully, keep em' coming