Every Day

Everyday my head is a Warzone

On one side of the bloody conflict

My undying love for you,

The other, anger and hate

for what you've turned me in to.

I wish thiswar inside off my head would end

But aslong as these undieing feeling for you,

Still linger in my head

I will still be this animal

Who needs you, Who wants you.

Everytime I wake up

My first thought is you

Why wont you leave

I've done so many things to make you

But still you stay

What evil Enchantment is upon me

Everytime I try to talk to you

I shy up

My mouths goes dry,

And I cannot, I can only cry out,

In my head

Were my thoughts remain.

Author's Note

One of my first peices

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-2 marks for the spelling :)
Nice Piece Mr Mcbayliss
though "shy up" = i dunno if you can say that :)

Flamboyant thoughts. Please re-align the poem a bit, just a thought. I like the rhyme scheme. Keep writing.

Thanks man
Feels good, for a first peice and all

[KL]	lool i joke! :P its good :) half of my last review was cut off.. WTF. -.-' ah well. its still very good :)))) Posted 14 Years Ago lool i joke! :P its good :) half of my last review was cut off.. WTF. -.-' ah well. its still very good :)))) Rating /100

Oh ffs
I knew that would come up

[KL]	noiicee.. describes my feelings for Rhianne ;) LOOL joke, i dont like her. >. Posted 14 Years Ago noiicee.. describes my feelings for Rhianne ;) LOOL joke, i dont like her. >. Rating /100