Dreamt

On repeat I've placed the vinyl,

Counterclockwise revolving time and a sundial.

A measurement I'm pressured in, teetering atop Navasu and Rhine Falls,

Soft in nature.

And whether it tappers and fades to black, remains to be seen.

Counting sheep, meandering.

I've placidly transcended, drifting in sleep.

Contemplating how I'd furthered this deep in poems and dream.

A totem planted,

It seems, immersed in dim and moonlight shadows,

Nocturnal, surreal, surrounded; drowning in constellations.

I'd float,

I'd escape, half-awake with the night Owl.

Amidst the Wolf howls that stood upon fields of broken clocks and black flowers.

This harvest from farming;

For fruit,

For truth,

For root, to keep me grounded,

Power of voice, energy abounding.

And all along the river or above the stratosphere and weather,

The heather grey Owl would speak of path and direction, an interesting introspecting perception.

As we've dove head first into past,

A clash projected, refracted through prisms and glass.

Dreamt.

A dream of mine, a dream of yours,

A dream of King.

Reviews

[KWP]

Well
Seeings I am currently in Patagonia where the views are deep and thoughts run deeper I can fully take a flying leap and fall right into your words here.

I like the tone, it feels light and ‘dreamlike’, floaty even.

Descriptions colour the way as one steps into your mind ... if only for a different view ... nice one my friend X

[Ty]

If at any time one is able to paint an image others can absorb, breathe, and live, we're one step closer to coexisting peacefully.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

I loved this piece, brilliant

[Nariko]

The way your poems come together, and how each line compliments one another. I just can't help but be fascinated with each and every piece

[LKBillips]

Lovely, haunting...searching through the night to find peace and ourselves. Beautifully written.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

And when we are in that dream what a wonderful place and time it is, loved the picture you brought to life real in real🌹

[Darkswing]

Lovely! Simply Surreal. I loved the way the story was portrayed. Good Job! Keep it up!

[Ty]

We all dream and cascading into alternate worlds and being. Thanks again Duane!

[Hope]

I have read your poem carefully, taking in the magic you have created. This time I have progressed in understanding your words, Ty. And I agree with admiration that you are a creative, articulate poet.
Its hard to create such stunning imagery through words. You should try to publish this ( and other poems) in print.
Just great Ty:)

[Ty]

Oh this means so much! A bit heavy at times, but really happy it seeped in. Would love to publish something! Thanks again.

[Hope]

Happy again!

[R.E. Ray]

Another impressive work, Ty. Spectacular imagery, even without the accompanying photograph. The beauty of dreams, as I read here, is truly how they transport us above ourselves and our daily lives. As illustrated here, it's a view from high above, unobstructed by physical barriers and noise, and the freedom to think and fly high... Perhaps from an elevated throne, the view of a king. Nice work!

[Ty]

So late, so sorry! A realm and being, views, and ways of seeing transcending. Many thanks my friend.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

ahhh beautiful
rapturous poem
exquisite
i love this!!

[Ty]

Oh, so kind! Glad you dropped by!

[Jes' Pi]

Hello.

I'm really glad that your poem was the first one I read today because it is very fresh, spirited and emotional.

The multiple significations are spinning
around a morning globe filled with a variety of nuances, colors,...

The way you described the human escape through the wild and the night birds is mesmerizing...for they are metaphors of reader's vision.

I can feel the earthly pulse through my veins, blood, neurons,....my entire being. Its vibrations are cold, fresh and aromatic...like citruses.

Concluding, the poem is out of the picture(metaphorically saying)...

[Ty]

This is probably one of the best reviews I've come across. Poetic in it's own right. This means a great deal, Jes! Can't thank you enough my friend.

[Jes' Pi]

My pleasure!

[Alfred Kukitz]

i always seem to ride on a spaceship of joy with you, words as planets, themes as galaxies. great write Ty!

regards,
al

[Ty]

A journey for us all! Many thanks my friend, please continue to drop in!